What? But he's not sparkling, totally not sparking. And he's clearly going to bite that girl to drink her blood, not minding how bad this would be. And he's not handsome and with a statuary body, how can you even call it a vampyre??
I absolutely love the mixture of Graf Orlok with Kurt Barlow, combined with your own ideas for clothing. The girl is quite stunning as well, the reds and greens contrasting with the blacks and greys. Brilliant!